Dennis-FCEExam-Marking-070408

=**FCE Exam Marking Activity**=

Open the teaching activity PDF file below and look at **question 3**. Read the task carefully and then each student should make a comment below to correct any problems or make suggestions to improve it. **You must be logged in to use the Edit this page function for this page **.

Do not repeat a correction or suggestion that others already have made, but you can make additional comments about the same topic.




 * __TASK FOR YOU TO MARK__

Important inventions.**

Nowdays, cars have become irreplaceable and people cannot stop using them. Cars have been invented to improve the quality of our lives but recently we have become addicted of them.

Not only do we use vehicles to do shopping but we also use them as the way of travelling. Getting to work by using the public transport is very difficult sometimes. and is also depended on traffic. There are some other advantages of having a car such as spending less money on buses and trains.

My life has changed since I collected my driving license. I have become more independed which is very important. I can decide the same day when I want to go and visit my uncle, who lives in different town. Having a car also is needed if I want to get a good job. There are some disadvanteges to have a car such as pollution, increasing noise and number of accidents on the roads. I try not to go by car everyplace because I know how important is to take care of enviroment. From my point of view the age of drivers is terrifing low. Young people are irresponsible and don't really care much about anything. Ohnestly, I think a car is a good invention but we need to think before using it. The time goes so fast and must be aware of our future. However serious the problem is, I don't think we can stop using car.

//**Dennis**//: Line 1: Spelling of "nowdays" is wrong - it should be "nowadays"
 * __ADD COMMENTS BELOW WITH YOUR NAME AND THE LINE NUMBER__**
 * Example Comment **


 * Letícia:** Line 2: "addicted of them" is wrong - it should be "addicted to them"


 * Corine**: Line 3: it should be "a way of travelling"


 * Rafael**: Line 8: spelling of "disadvanteges"is wrong -it should be "disadvantages"


 * Vinicius:** Line 8: Spelling of "enviroment" is wrong - it should be "environment"


 * Leonardo**: Line 10: spelling of "ohnestly" is wrong - it should be "honestly"


 * Ricardo:** Line 11: Instead of "think a car", it should be "think //the// car"

See my comments on this text to help you correct the problems