Dennis-FCEExam-Marking-070408-DW

=FCE Exam Marking Activity=

I have marked //**some**// of the problems using the following code: Red = missing information (every x is one letter) Blue = grammar error Green = spelling mistake __underlined__ = vocabulary mistake
 * Bold** = excellent!


 * Important inventions.**

Nowdays, cars have become irreplaceable and people cannot stop using them. Cars have been invented to improve the quality of our lives but recently we have become addicted of them.

Not only do we use vehicles to do shopping but we also use them as __the__ way of travelling. Getting to work by using __the__ public transport is very difficult sometimes. __and__ is also __depended__ on traffic. There are some other advantages of having a car **,** such as spending less money on buses and trains.

My life has changed since I __collected__ my driving license. I have become more __independed__ **,** which is very important. I can decide the same day when I want to go and visit my uncle, who lives in x different town. Having a car also is needed if I want to get a good job. There are some disadvanteges to have a car such as pollution, increasing noise and number of accidents on the roads. I try not to go by car __everyplace__ because I know how important xx is to take care of xxx enviroment. From my point of view**, ** the age of drivers is __terrifing__ low. Young people are irresponsible and don't really care much about anything. Ohnestly, I think a car is a good invention but we need to think before using it. __The__ time goes so fast and must be aware of our future. However serious the problem is, I don't think we can stop using __car__.

__**General Comments**__ **Content** Argument well developed. **Accuracy** There are some errors, but they do not generally impede communication. **Range** A suitable range of structure and vocabulary for the level Generally good linking. Generally appropriate. Target Reader ** Would be informed.
 * Organisation and Cohesion **
 * Appropriacy of Register and Format **


 * Band 3

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