Dennis-FCEEx-HW-May-SB

Dear Mrs. Brown

I have played your game and it is very funny. However, I had a lot of problems with the advertisement, and I have made some notes about things I disagree.

I won the game, although there is only one prize for the winners. In fact, I did not win anything, so I am very diasappointed. Another point is that it is too expensive, if you cut the cost, more people would play. The advertisement said that all money goes to charity. However, 50% goes on administration, so it is wrong.

The game will be much more funnier if you make the advertisement better and other things. I am looking forward hearing from you.

My sincerely, Nigel Spivey-Dribble

**Please add comments below, not forgetting to add the line number and your name** **---**


 * Corine: I think it is Band 2/3 because; **
 * You made some errors but the communication was possible. **
 * You could improve the letter by doing it more formal and explaining why do you thing: “it is very funny” or “other things”(line 8/9). **
 * You did not include why it was easy to play **
 * Line 8: It should be “much funnier" **
 * Line 9: It should be “I am looking forward to hearing from you” **
 * Line 10: It should be “Yours sincerely” **


 * Vini: I Think it is a Band 2 because: **
 * He did a considerable number of errors and in some points it's confusing like **
 * "I won the game, although there is only one prize for the winners." **


 * Gui: This text deserves Band 2, not only because there are many mistakes but also there is very few words.Altough, it is possible to understand what the writer would like to say, his thinks are not well located. In fact, the writer should improve his vocabulary! ;] hugs **


 * And informations are missing. You could say more things about the advertisement. **


 * Ricardo: I would consider this as a Band 2/3, considering the mistakes already described on lines 8 and 9, plus the fact that you should have introduced yourself better and should have been more formal than that. The advertisement, as well said by my coleague Guilherme, should have been more described. Still, it was understandable, therefore, it would receive 2/3. **
 * Adios! (Ah, and you have a beatiful name :D) **