Dennis-FCEEx-HW-May-SA

Dear Sir/ Madam I am writing to complain about the advertisement of the game made by your company. I have played it and, to my surprise, it was not the same as the information in the advertising. First of all, you said that it is a game of very low cost. In fact, it is a very expensive game, since £5 per game is a price much more expensive than the average of games. Furthermore I was very surprised when I found out there was only one prize. The problems do not stop there. When I was playing the game, I noticed that it is a very hard game, different from what is said in the pamphlet. In additional, 50 % for the all money goes to charity but I really feel you should sent my money to the charity, like is said in the advertisement. You do not seem to realize, but it is clear that there is a problem of communication. I must insist that it would be better to the company if, in the next advertisement, the information would not be so misleading and I hope that in future the problems will be solved. Yours faithfully, George Da Vinci **Please add comments below, not forgetting to add the line number and your name** **---**

Corine: I think it is Band 3/4 because; All points were included To make it more formal you should use words such as "stated" instead of "said" Line 6: It should have a comma after "Furthermore"  Line 9:(I'm no sure but) Shouldn't it be send instead of sent?

 Vini: I Think it is band 4 because: He used a good range of vocabulary and the informantions are organized. In addition he included all major points. Gui: My japanese friend did very well in this text, and for me it should be Band 4. Good Vocabulary, good structure! Like my other japaniese friend said above, i think there is a comma missing after Furthermore. More hugs, and kisses! hugs!